Warrior Princess

This poem was okay, nothing spectacular, but a start. (I see you're a newbie--welcome to this neurotic website of terror!) Overall I dpn't think it's very clear; you never really ...

This is a really good poem, and very expressive. The "lost love" theme is particularly resonating for me, since I have only very recently been torn ruthlessly away from the ...

Wow, this story is imaginative and wacky--even I, who am fifteen and fond of Shakespeare and Dickens, loved it! It was very creative for you to use a dog as ...

What up girlfriend? Liked your story a lot. I am always drawn to stories about slaves in America, being a huge (and I mean HUGE) fan of Uncle Tom's Cabin, ...

Hey girlfriend--this is the most interesting thing I've read on YWS in quite a while! Personally I'm like running_with_the_devil; I always love twists on fairy tales and such. And the ...

I DID NOT GET IT!!!!!!!!!! Nate, I have NO idea who (or what) you are, but what the HECK is with you and your random polls????!!!!!!! Oh well they are ...

This is the exact poem I wrote for the love of my life when he had to move far away. Believe it or not, I wrote it all in five ...

This poem is kind of in the Plains of Asphodel right now. (For those of you ignorant of Greek mythology, that was the place where souls who were neither good ...

Well, I disagree with the first two replies. I LOVED IT!!!!! If you read some of my own stuff, you'll find that this is very much my kind of poetry: ...

"You're just a teenager," you say, Visibly proud of your own maturity, "And when you're that age You don't know what love is." Oh no. Of course not. I wouldn't ...

O tongue, the gift of God to man I wish that you could understand The feelings within me today And speak the words I long to say. Strange emotions well ...

You have good imagery and descriptions here, maybe a little too much. Have you seen 10,000 B.C.? OMG that is like my fave movie, and this kind of reminded me ...

Okay....*deep breath* I didn't think it was scary so much as dark, disturbing, and slightly sadistic. It gave me a mental image I did not particularly want. Did I enjoy ...

Whoa...interesting. I didn't completely get it, but abstract is a highly respected art form, and this was definitely abstract. I liked it though, because it has some very unique imagery, ...

Wow, interesting and exciting. You have a good thing going here. Of course, you can't expect me to be too critical; I'm a sucker for action anything. Syte said the ...